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The Devil's in the RemoteJune 23, 2012

It ain’t working for Men at Work

During the past few years, we’ve seen comedy evolve and redefine itself over and over again. Mocumentaries, single-camera, dramedies have all successfully reinvented the genre. But just as comedy became more high-brow in its approach, the “hangout” show too had to evolve to regain its footing. It’s easy to dismiss “hangout” shows as having nothing substantial to offer, but the truth is creating characters with whom the audience will consider spending time with and investing their energies in are at times harder to create and maintain than high-concept shows, where the premise alone carries a show through.

Keep a show loose around its edges and its writers have a better chance of populating its universe with quirks, tweaking the premise, and fix what isn’t working. Men at Work either fails to realise its shortcomings or is happy ignoring them. Danny Masterson (That 70s Show) is a bad fit as lead and the ensemble lacks crucial chemistry. The acting and the comedic timing is sub-par, which may be fixable through better editing and direction. But it may not be worth it.

The jokes run  stale and the characters are truly two-dimensional in all episodes previewed so far, with no concern being shown for their development. There was a point in the pilot where I foolishly believed that there may be a gay-reveal, which would afford Tyler’s character and that of his friends some growth, but no dice. Instead, storylines like “Tyler is possessive of his toilet” get the spotlight. MP: Point proven. Summer comedies are unwatchable.

The guests have mostly outshined the ensemble, which is sad because all of these actors have decent work to their credit. But just as the writing does not inspire, the actors’ commitment to the work too doesn’t leave a mark. Better actors have sold mediocre lines with the their brilliant deliveries, and good writing has often forced actors to up their game. MP: What do you do with a show like MaW (think Sound of Music). Nothing’s worse than an unfunny comedy; the jokes fall flat and the production team try resuscitating a horse they beat dead with their insufferable unoriginality. But what do I know…

Maybe at the end of the season I may check in again with the show to see if anything has improved but for now, this is not a group of people I want to hang out with. MP: Neither would I, and I haven’t even seen this yet!

 

Shazia is part bionic, part crazy (parts not mutually exclusive), and would be happy conversing solely in TV quotes, forever hopeful she’ll be one-upped in her obscure TV references. She blogs here and microblogs here.

“MP” is Maryam Piracha, TMS’s Editor-in-Chief who, as a fellow couch potato, will make an appearance on TDitR from time to time, mostly in italics.

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One last love letter...

April 24, 2021

It has taken us some time and patience to come to this decision. TMS would not have seen the success that it did without our readers and the tireless team that ran the magazine for the better part of eight years.

But… all good things must come to an end, especially when we look at the ever-expanding art and literary landscape in Pakistan, the country of the magazine’s birth.

We are amazed and proud of what the next generation of creators are working with, the themes they are featuring, and their inclusivity in the diversity of voices they are publishing. When TMS began, this was the world we envisioned…

Though the magazine has closed and our submissions shuttered, this website will remain open for the foreseeable future as an archive of the great work we published and the astounding collection of diverse voices we were privileged to feature.

If, however, someone is interested in picking up the baton, please email Maryam Piracha, the editor, at maryamp@themissingslate.com.

Farewell, fam! It’s been quite a ride.

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